Legend of the Manticareye

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Legend of the Manticareye

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Long ago in deepest part of the jungle, lived the Manticareye (MAN-ti-care-eye ). A HUGE beast that was part man, part tiger, and and drop beastly eggs that, ubder the care of other creatures roamed the forest calmly. All the magis feared the manticareye for every year an offering was to be given, a magi. But not just any magi, on January 13th every year, he would prey upon a city, with a toenail the size of a building, he would crush everything until it was all a pulp, unless the correct magi was offered. Throughout the year he would tell the city where he knew the magi would be hints
One year, he gave only 1 hint, "The magi I seek will come." His mighty terrifying voice spoke. But nobody understood.
The city panicked and attempted to flee on January 12, when there were no more hints. But the manticareye made sure they stayed, threatening to crush them if they ran away. One woman, called Veartus (VEAR-tis), had escaped and found the Manticareye's ofspring, and tamed them. These so called monsters were strong, but not like the Manticareye, capable of carrying a lion, but not destroying a city. They looked like black lions with large black wings.
Veartus brought all the beasts and defeated the Manticareye in a battle, she did come, the magi Manticareye wanted, but she was not eaten. She was awared withall the treasure the city could get, and the beloved creatures were named Manticores, based on the beast who destroyed every town and city, and the City became known as Mantcareye, after that mighty beast.
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Re: Legend of the Manticareye

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Hmm very interesting :D
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Re: Legend of the Manticareye

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thanks, I'm not one for writing,but when it comes to contests, I just get an idea, personally, I think I could have added more detail. Oh well, I don't have enough time, in a few min. i am leaving for 3 days :t-cry:
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Re: Legend of the Manticareye

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nightbug08 wrote:Hmm very interesting :D
Agreed! :yarly: Nice Orgin story! ^_^ :D :crazy:
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